Thursday, 6 May 2010

3rd Concept Piece

Not much of a difference in this one compared to the first. The only difference is I made the bold black likes on the mountain peaks thinner and the tips more rounded.

Added in the sperm 'swimming' through the air towards the egg 'the moon'. I'm wondering if I need to make the sperm a little bit bigger so that its not lost against the background.

1 comment:

  1. You're right, Lev - in terms of staging, shouldn't the emphasis of your scenes be on the 'sperm' - try and break the 'mid-distance' barrier - get in there; if this was a wildlife documentary, imagine how frustrating it would be for the audience if all the interesting stuff was kept in the middle distance...